tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8746185529766786528.post7012106811246099405..comments2023-07-26T07:56:04.689-07:00Comments on Asili the Journal Blogspot: for jayne cortez (25)Joseph McNairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13632541290130918773noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8746185529766786528.post-57270003076315288962009-06-18T05:07:31.356-07:002009-06-18T05:07:31.356-07:00This poem was ok the only thing i did not like was...This poem was ok the only thing i did not like was the begining. Howerever it had a nice flow and tone to it.venessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18078612867793170412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8746185529766786528.post-38821291365002016422009-06-11T06:01:51.689-07:002009-06-11T06:01:51.689-07:00This poem conveys a nice message. It had a nice fl...This poem conveys a nice message. It had a nice flow and I really like it.Dayanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12967545056741670197noreply@blogger.com